This is worse than the previous response video that was posted.
The quality of the video is really well put together but he just seems to miss the point of SEPW criticisms entirely. I'm not trying to defend SEPW here, I think he was hyperbolic and pedantic a lot of the times for entertainment sake, but this video seems more concerned with direct rebuttals of the examples SEPW used rather than the points he was trying to make.
Best example would be the ending fan fic. Both VB and SEPW come to the same conclusion and point, they only differ slightly in the execution. The point SEPW was trying to make is that the ending should have shown how Ryo improved or at least shown how his progress up to this point affects his relationship with Lan Di in some way; as of the end of S3 they are basically in the same position. Since VB comes to the same conclusion anyway, just doesn't agree with the use of the body check here, he is the one that ends up coming across as pedantic in his video.